National Poetry Month – Day 25: Unrequited #2

In my Day 16 post, Unrequited #1, I said I would attempt to also write haikus for the remaining two men in my memoir-in-progress, tentatively named Unrequited #2 & Unrequited #3. But tonight, it occurred to me that I only have 5 days left in National Poetry Month to do so!

I attempted to summarize Unrequited #2 in seventeen syllables — not an easy task! If you don’t believe me, give it a try — summarize a love, or any relationship in seventeen syllables. 🙂

As always, if you share your haiku in the comments of this blog, you might win a copy of my book, Life: Haiku by Haiku!

Scenic view of a calm blue lake with red rock formations and vegetation, featuring an overlay of poetic text.
Lake Havasu

Stay tuned for Unrequited #3’s haiku.

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New to writing haiku? Here’s the pattern:

Three lines with a total of seventeen syllables:

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

Anyone who shares a haiku in the comments is entered into a drawing to win a copy of my book, Life: Haiku by Haiku!

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2 Responses to National Poetry Month – Day 25: Unrequited #2

  1. drrobbscott says:

    A heart feels attracted
    Alights briefly here and there
    Very nearly love

  2. Jan Morrill says:

    Very nice, Robb! The power of a haiku comes in the last line, and this one is just right.

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